Wrap Gold
by admin on Saturday, October 29th, 2011 | Comments Off
Wrap Gold
Am I using semicolons correctly here? Or should I be using commas?
How many of us cotton-wrapped, gold-plated kiwis with eyes of money and palm-sized platinum-dipped plastic pals have ever roughed it out on the dodgy, dark, grotty alleyways of Auckland City; slept in soggy, putrid, cockroach-infested cardboard boxes which provide barely an ounce of protection against the harsh, unforgiving elements; or spent night after dreary night sleeping restlessly on frost-covered pavements encrusted with immeasurable layers of dry, foul-smelling excrement expelled unceremoniously by dirty, odorous canines and laced with the eggs and multiple spawn of microscopic worms and other blood-sucking unsightly parasites?
I really really need an answer...please reply!
I agree, that should read as an entire paragraph. Revise with more developed, and succinct, sentences, and you should be in better shape. You have descriptive thoughts, however, so the core is there. Good luck.
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